Thursday 17th August 2023
Steps to Success
We are learning to edit peer’s writing on its text structure and the use of directional words and preposition of place.
To demonstrate the directional text structure To assess the use of directional words and preposition of place
Name three directional words that you can use in a sentence?
What do you think about this text?
Suzanna and her family live in the Wisma Flats. Suzanna’s grandfather is visiting them from Miri. Suzanna’s mother usually drives her to school but she is busy. She asks Grandfather to drive Suzanna to school. She writes down the directions to the school so that he does not get lost. Directions from the Wisma flats to the school From the Wisma Flats turn left onto Jalan Merah. Go past the bank. Turn right onto Jalan Kuning. Go along Jalan Kuning past the taxi stand. Go straight through the traffic lights. Drive to the end of Jalan Kuning past the mall. The school is on the left opposite the mechanic shop.
Quick Group Discussion
Writing samples will be given to each group Read the question below and put your responses on the paper
Folder Check Up!
Please take one copy of the writing. Check your friend's writing. Use the Checklist given. Use the green colour pencil to put a small tick on the directional words and preposition of place. Write two stars and a wish for your friend.
I can see directional words. I can see preposition of place. I can see time connectives. There is an introduction. There is the body of the text.
Brain break: Draw a simple map on how to get to the toilet from our classroom.
Let's Peer it up!
Go to your friend and give a simple feedback to him/her. Write two stars and a wish for your friend. Edit your draft with the help of the checklist. Write/ Type your edited or correct writing.
Which sentence is better?
- Go along Jalan Biru past the cinema
- Go along Jalan Biru through the cinema
- Go along Jalan Biru over the cinema
- Go along Jalan Biru below the cinema
Can you think of any sentences that use directional words in a creative way?
What was your favorite part of today's lesson?