What is the difference between showing and telling? Telling: Bailey was happy. Showing: A gigantic smile spread across Bailey's face, and her eyes lit up like the sky on the 4th of July.
Think about the 5 senses: smell, touch, sight, taste, and sound Use the 5 senses to help guide your writing
HOW do we write by showing and not telling?
Draw this sentence: Juan was sad.
Now, write a sentence to describe what you see when someone is sad. Example: Tears ran down Juan's face.
Which sentence SHOWS, not tells.
- Brian pursed his lips and clenched his fits into tight ball.
- Brian was angry.
- Brian yelled.
Brain break: Draw a monster with six eyes, a banana for a nose, and wearing a superhero cape.
Which sentence SHOWS, not tells.
- Sam was excited to see her dad.
- Sam sprinted across the room, jumped into her dads arms, and buried her head in his chest.
- Sam was so happy.
Change this sentence to SHOW, not tell: Ted was so happy when his team scored a goal.
Why is 'show not tell' important in writing?
- It helps readers to visualize the scene and feel more connected with the characters
- It makes the writing process faster
- It saves space on the page
Which sentence is an example of showing?
- The sun beat down on his skin making him feel hot.
- 'I'm feeling so hot,' he said.
Change this sentence to show, not tell: Casey felt nervous.