Revise your paragraph and then vote on which one is the most effective.

Mrs Wallace

paige.vetter

annette.logan

kdemolles

wlin

jharrison

grantm

yesenia.ortiz

megan.mcqueen

trodriguez

hmurphey

ddiambrosio

twilliams

jhousley

pooja.khedkar

kristin_bachman

katrina.may

bhoernchen

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