Revise your paragraph and then vote on which one is the most effective.

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jharrison

annette.logan

yesenia.ortiz

grantm

ddiambrosio

jhousley

katrina.may

pooja.khedkar

bhoernchen

pamelamontero98

pleal

sarah.mcA

srnims

moczy08

nmier

teresa.hruska

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